day in the life of a garden of haiku
rain tumbles birds chirp
petals purple, pink, white yellow
geraniums red
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rain tumbles birds chirp
petals purple, pink, white yellow
geraniums red
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I like the drum roll before the red geraniums
Gee thanks! The poem does have a drumbeat that I hadn’t noticed—my heart beat must have had a hand in it!!!!
Yes absolutely what gabby said.
And, the inference of season sends this snapshot to the next level.
Expertly crafted.
Thanks! It is a kinda snapshot!
Gee thanks! The poem does have a drumbeat I hadn’t noticed but my heartbeat must have had a hand in it!
Oops my comments are repeating—I think I finally figured how to reply to comments!