untitled
unplugged
hands free to wrap around
garden implements, cooking utensils,
musical instruments, carpenter’s tools,
books, friends, lovers, babies; hair
and make-up done by wind and sun,
clothing along for the free ride, bare
feet dug into soft dirt, down
past bullets and buttons
of the recent ones, beneath the bones
of ancient ones, to touch the heart
of Great Mother herself
what they do is worth doing.
i try not to stare at them too much
10 thoughts on "untitled"
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
Love this! What about use unplugged as title and go on from there?
Linda: it was an artistic choice.
I wish “untitled” didn’t come up in
the title space. I wish it would be
blank.
of course my love
of this is-
of-bvious!!
*echo* linda’s plug for a possible title transplant.
there was no explanation
for this piece, certainly
“unplugged” wouldn’t
explain it.
Thanks for the suggestion though
Very nice – I like how the freedom goes from hands to feet.
Unplugging to find grounding. From hands to toes, where the true connections can/are formed.
Really making me want to go and walk about barefoot and feel the earth.
what they do is worth doing.
i try not to stare at them too much
This gave me goosebumps. Excellent poem!
Love this! Last lines a great twist, brings me back to the beginning “unplugged.”
A delightful, brief journey to a deep place. Nice writing, Jim.
Reading your poetry is always my favorite part of lexpomo 🙂