A Morning Fog Clears
Light fog edged across the garden at dawn
The morning after a strawberry moon
In the mist, a figure walks, a small fawn.
He stands frozen listening for death’s swoon
No mother to watch the shadows of June
Are we all listening? Are we alone?
The fawn moves onward. Fear lifts. He walks home
Each morning brings fog or rain, cold, or heat
We wake and decide what path we call our own
Whether the day brings victory or defeat
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I appreciate your use of image and rhyme here
Thank you Shawn! It was my first attempt at a Diazin poem. I don’t typically write in rhyme, but I wanted to give it a shot.
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Beautiful! I love the tension here, and the rich imagery— and I am glad he (for today) “walks home”!
Wonderful dizain, my friend!
Thank you, Michele!🌹
The rhyme works here, I think. Well-chosen words.
Thanks so much, Greg. Rhyme has never been my strong suit, so I was a bit nervous giving it a try.