Present feelings.
I did love you.
i dont regret it.
you’re a great guy.
But we just don’t fit.
its no one fault,
but I’m too scared.
because of the past,
I don’t see us in the future.
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Like the tightness and couplets of this.
I agree with Linda. And I like the juxtaposition of “past” and “future” in the last stanza.
Love the couplets, the specific use of dialogue to drive the poem.
just by the way, I made a response poem to my own poem (this one), It’s called “I Lied, and I’m Pissed.” TW 🙂