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Beebalm and honewort,
the garden a fever —
wrists bitten for love,
pulse drunk on dusk,
red-lidded nectar,
half-lipped prayers —
still as sonograms,
we wait for wings —
the soft-lantern kind,
the ones that mistake
light for warmth.
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I’m a broken record: This is absolute perfection.
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Beebalm and honewort,
the garden a fever — love this! I had not heart of honewort, so thank you for that.
The tightness and word choice here is stellar.
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Wow. Wonderful word craft. Every darned word earns its keep in this poem, and you’ve got them in precisely the right order. Thank you so much for sharing this!
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I agree with others. Rights words, right order! The concision is stunning yet it remains lyrical.
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“the ones that mistake
light for warmth.”
is a fitting end to the poem you chiseled to perfection.
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Agree with others commenting before me. Perfect!
Love the sound and rhythm “Beebalm and honewort”
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I could ask for nothing more…. agree with everyone’s comments! Utterly wonderful!
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