Vampire Audition Tape
Vampire Audition Tape
Take 1
Daryl Claps
Red Light Slaps
What Would Goldie do?
A joke
Meshed in reality.
More light
Different color
Offset the expectation.
Daryl does it from the side
Peaking on his profile
Remove the panopticons
Let them see your eyes
They’ve Invited You In
Aching to Begin
Fomo for the win
Suckling the Blood from all the good times
I thought we were friends
Heart wide open
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The title really drew me in! There is a playful nature to the rhythm and rhyme but an undercurrent of sadness (“I thought we were friends”). I see this is Take 1. Will we get a Take 2?
The lines lilt with each other like people walking side by side. I picture Owen Wilson or Bill Murray reading this.
I like that the eyes invited you in. That whole last stanza has an air of being it’s own entirety. I love the word “panopticons”
Thank you Sylvia.