Vincent’s Storm
As storm nears, it lays a film over sky
& landscape—clouds yellow, rooftops
darken, fields lay subtler like antique
patches of baby’s breath/the barest of blue/
a thin pink. Winds sail over splintered-wood
church & speckled path, heading
for open fields.
Inside cornflower & poppy, spray, sprig, tail of fern,
rest in the glaze of vase whose pleats spin like a merry-
go-round.
Bedroom leans blue: pitcher, self-portraits,
absinthe windows, flaxen chairs, floorboards,
coat, towel, tea steam, all but the inhabitant,
absent behind his easel.
After storm, tree’s mauve flames char sky & curl cloud
edges, even daring to inflame sun into more beams & warm
moon into rosiness.
And now—how stars spin their frizzy
lemon light into lake paths, through splintered waves,
over trees curved green & heads
leaning into kisses.
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Gorgeous lines, especially,”clouds yellow, rooftops
darken, fields lay subtler like antique
patches of baby’s breath/the barest of blue/
a thin pink. ”
I have seen this. You describe it well!
Thank you!
Oh holy waow!!!!
OK so I knew Vincent was in the room from the title but a wasn’t ready for that……the whole thing is thick pigment and sky and then the ending …..that !”And now—how stars spin their frizzy
lemon light into lake paths, through splintered waves,
over trees curved green & heads
leaning into kisses.”
That!!!!!! Is what words can do.
Wow.
Thank you so much!
More accomplished ekphrasis. The omission of the articles here is an interesting touch that adds to the strangeness of van Gogh’s work.
Thank you!
This absolutely painterly and luscious. The littering of alliteration, consonance etc throughout the poem is musical. I’m so happy to read your work!
Aww, how kind– thank you!
I feel I am living a moment described so richly in the poem, head spinning to take everything in as the storm makes it’s way through.
Thank you–glad you like it!
Another stunner, Taunja. I’ll mention the strength of the verbs in this piece and the beautiful color words you’ve chosen.
Thanks!
I also love the verbs and how you layer color words. There’s such great movement and sound in “patches of baby’s breath/the barest of blue/a thin pink…” just to name one.
Thanks so much, Shaun!
Yes!
Thanks!