Visitation From a Former Lover
You perch on the branch
of a black walnut tree. Forty-years
since our last goodbye.
Your wife posts photographs
of you in your hospice bed.
By now you’ve taken flight.
Unlikely that we meet like this,
you as a pilated woodpecker,
me with a journal & gel pen.
Wearing your characteristic beret,
still reading science fiction, listening
to bebop – Miles Davis, Charlie Parker
& Thelonious Monk. I hear
your resonant peck-peck-peck
as you try to get my attention.
Your charcoal eyes blink & flare
like cinders in the trees.
You definitely have a message.
Thelonious used to stand up
from the piano to witness
the solos of band members –
their riffs, snaps & snares.
You recognize my contribution,
want me to join the chorus.
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“Unlikely that we meet like this,
you as a pilated woodpecker,
me with a journal & gel pen.”
I am drawn to this entire poem– how clever and real it is, but also how you keep the familiar mystery moving in the moment.
This is an excellent write.
Wonderful and poetically coherent the whole way through.
Very well twisted.
The rhythm and reading
Synch up in concise turns.
You hold the pen n we’re with you crispy and schmokin and say without sayin,” I’m with the band.”
This is beautiful, Linda. Heartful throughout.
first stanza got my attention. fitting choice of a piliated woodpecker
I love the part – rising to witness the solos of band members. Each with their part, alone and also not. What it is to be witnessed. Lovely.
What an insightful, imaginative, and emotional poem. You do a masterful job of building character and scene!
love:
“you as a pilated woodpecker,
me with a journal & gel pen.
(especially the choice of bird and “gel” for type of pen)
wow: blink & flare
like cinders in the trees.
beautiful poem with depth of a former love
Wonderful! Rich imagery and so imaginative—with sweet sentiment.
I love that last line.
the last line, sense of being seen truly and loved, is beautiful
Condolences and oh my goodness!
Fabulous tribute to a loved one.
Adore the woodpecker, the jazz …
The undoubtable honor throughout.
The elements and detail of this poem come together so carefully. I agree with what others have said: what a tribute.
I felt like I was watching a very intimate moment between woman and bird. Beautiful – The gel pen drove me over the edge!!
Wonderful as always, Linda. This reminds me a bit of Maxine Kumin’s great poem The Retrieval System. High praise indeed.