visiting relatives
by day two
to excuse myself to the bedroom is no longer enough
during
this storm
i retreat further in
to the bathroom
where the joists are stronger
and i don’t have to listen to the stories
being thrown around
like plastic balls
of fun times
of luxury vacations
and especially of your trip to
el paso
the bathroom
with the door closed and locked
is where i recall
MY
el paso story
the western
with plot twists
cocaine
child abuse
and escape
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Experience with the world, just as varied as each of us. I like how the subject of the poem is trying to protect their story and point of view.
Amy, your insight is truly astounding…. I can’t thank you enough for your thoughtful response(s) ?
I love how the stanzas recount an increasing retreat and the poem ends with escape.
Thank you, Gaby ….. yes, escape, the perfect ending!
The turn in the poem is heart-wrenching, Amy.