Waiting for a nun in front of St. Peter’s Square
would be easy, you’d think: there’d be
a _______________of nuns (choir, convent, coven,
clerestory, clique, cloister?). but only three or four
glide past me. more tourist-clergy all in black in Roman swelter
no monks or friars save me in mufti in the shade
over this hour of waiting. more African vendors
festooned with bracelets and bangles, some scarves,
some odd multicolored phone gadgets, vuoi comprarlo?
and the old man in a T-shirt guarding bags of trash,
every few minutes sweeping a wrapper and retreating
to Roman shade. the snakes of badged tourists stream
in undulating waves ears tuned to the guide in front.
now a choir young singers clutching scores dressed
in black suits, black skirts, off to some vatican do.
and waiting.
until i realize the title of my next poem:
“stood up by a nun in rome.”
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nice sense of brushing shoulders with the high and low here.
*the collective noun for moths is ‘whisper’ or ‘eClipse’
to my eye/ear either of those might work nice here.
I will try those out; was going for the C sound, so eClipse might be good, and whisper almost too good to miss!
i thought you might be going for a c sound…
a covey, a caravan, a chord, a chime,a charter, a catalog :)?? ok ok, i’ll stop now.
sry, i lied, but really ones one… words woke me up from a nap-
a school
or
a squadron.. (too on the nose-when they fly?)
love the stream of consciousness flow while you’re waiting and can’t wait to learn why you were stood up
She totally forgot! And apologized profusely about 90 minutes past time!
I like the mystery of her standing you up!
Ha! You’d think that in Rome you couldn’t swing a dead cat without hitting a nun…
That was the starting point for the poem!
Now, this is some title!
And, I adore the ending!!!
love:
a _______________of nuns (choir, convent, coven,
clerestory, clique, cloister?).
The idea of Roman shade intrigues me, having suffered sunstroke in Anzio one summer long ago. Very nicely done, Greg.
Thanks, Nancy. The place we agreed to wait had a shade entrance…nice view of St Peter’s on a sweltering Roman afternoon…
You brought me there with your imagery and humor. Wonderful!
Love this! The fill-in-the blank–fun. (I learned a new word: clerestory). The language is beautiful.
I especially like the fill-in-the-blank spot for a collective of nuns. Great fun that they’re all “c” words listed!