Watch Where You Walk
Where the old lake used to be, near the coven of maples, felled by high winds and frequent storms, the portal opens as fairy ring. Formed by mushrooms that used to communicate through roots, says the oracle. But warns that we could disappear should we dare to veer inside the circle. All winter the beagle and I dance a ritual around the green circumference, side-stomp the boundary. But spring brings lines that thin to invisible. Now, how gingered and deliberate we tip-toe this liminal space.
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I can see, hear, smell, and feel this one, Roberta! Loved it!
Thanks, Liz!
So much to love in this poem. That beginning sentence. The image of “a coven of maples” & “the portal opens as fairy ring,” & the beagle and you dancing a ritual & side-stomping the boundary.
Lovely repeated short “i” vowel sound in the last two sentences.
This poem really transported me. So dreamy & imaginative.
Great poem!
Very nice, Roberta. I like how the poem brings me through time, however fanciful the ideas.
Love this incantation…
A magical forest fairy poem. Love it.
Beautiful. I was walking in the woods with you as I read this – incredible imagery!
I love the fantasy of this piece, the fairy ring and portal.
Just what I needed to read on Day 2 of my first (and hopefully) last Covid infection.
Especially like:
Now, how gingered and deliberate we tip-toe this liminal space.
Dang, Pam! So sorry. I finally got it in January. Not fun!
Love the subject matter of this poem–those liminal spaces that we as a species often claim to disbelieve but, on some level, still deem real. And I like the image of you & the dog dancing around the area!