watching wrens
watching wrens
brown thrashers and other thorn
birds shuffle their decks of cards
as i kneel to examine swollen orange
mushrooms with cantaloupe skins.
wrens cooperate in this irrational
forest, destroying a swallows nest.
the pair hold their tails upright, like
halves of a lifting bridge.
Procne had a son whom she boiled,
and served to his father for breakfast
as revenge since he raped her sister.
then the gods turned her into a swallow
so she might avoid vengeance.
both sexes of tree swallows feed the
wee nestlings, at a rate of 10 to 20
feedings per hour. the male wren
probably punctured any eggs the
swallow laid, to show his mate how
tough he was.
wrens would be wholly inconspicuous
if not for their complex songs which
can carry as far as 1,000 feet, or
the distance between our two
hearts that last breakfast.
we gambled on each other, sure
as daylight pours through these
hackberry limbs- but we busted like
a yolk sun sinks into far hills pitted
like dense bread.
no gods anywhere could have made
your voice any clearer in my head
than it is now, watching wrens.
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This poem is a bridge between the deep water here: “as i kneel to examine swollen orange/mushrooms with cantaloupe skins ” and here: “-but we busted like/a yolk sun sinks into far hills pitted/like dense bread.”
yes the mushrooms looking so much like cantaloupe steered me towards a kind of breakfast themed poem, thanks for pointing out the deep water …bogged-down theme.
Lovely use of language.
appreicate it!
A great narrative. It uses a technique that is great for poetry of having the reader think the poem is about one thing (wrens) and ends up being about something entirely unexpected.
Thanks…sometimes i use wikipedia for cool facts to lace into my hiking poems…in general my hiking poems are love or loss poems too!