Waxing Gibbous
****Written after a comment from dustin cecil****
How much moon does it take to see?
A starving man will appreciate what little he receives.
Could it be there really is a purpose
to an unnatural yearning for essentially a stranger,
a purpose fulfilled by its very existence
as a singular spot of hope on the darkest night?
Are you merely meant to be a distraction to desire
luring my hunger back through so many years
to a cache of spiritual energy, a memory of kindness
secretly stored for a time of emotional famine?
They say that sometimes we write poetry
solely for ourselves, which is not destined to see
the light of any day, maybe because the memory
would never open its eyes for anyone else.
Maybe I just needed a character
to offset life’s daily destructions just long enough
for me to find a foothold of success
in the effort toward building a better me.
I’m being vague, but
someday I hope I can fully share
how you might have saved my life
years and years in advance.
Guess what I’m really trying to say now is
our little chance encounter may have been
all the moonlight I need to survive the dark.
I will follow it as long as it shines.
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great opening.
Thank you so much for your comments, and for asking those poignant questions a couple poems back.
i’m glad it was an ace of swords you found. and now a three.. that card is brutal.
I’m not so convinced the three of swords wouldn’t have been present in the months leading up to this Lexpomo.
Liked this poem…Philip especially 4th stanza about writing poetry!
Really appreciate your comments, Linda. This poem was kind of a surprise to me, but a joy to write. Thank you.
I really enjoyed this. Opening with a question is a great rhetorical move, too.
I owe the question to dustin cecil. He asked that question in a comment on another poem, and that’s where this one came from. Seemed fitting to lead with it. Thank you for your comment.
like the line “all the moonlight I need to survive in the dark”
Really glad you do! Thank you for the comment!
I like that you admit to being vague and everything else about it
It seemed best, because I’m not quite ready to put the specifics into a public poem yet, in the way that, well, a gibbous moon is not a full moon.
Great closing!
What a beginning: How much moon does it take to see?
A starving man will appreciate what little he receives.
Thank you so much!