We All Can’t Be Superfly Jimmy Snuka
It was a sticky summer day (sweltering)
Annie Lennox belted, “Nooooooo
moooooooore
I
love yous ”
her words fell with the melody,
c a
r c e d
k l through broken speakers
We played that song on loop for a month except when
time. froze. briefly.
My best friend (Theresa) flew through the air
s o a r e d actually,
while wearing her ill-fitting flower print bikini (that she loved despite all the adjusting)
she ffffffffffffaaaaaaaaaadeeeeeed to a shadow
((((eclipsing))) the sun
throwing her hands into the air,
s p r e a d i n g her fingers wide
k-i-c-k-i-n-g her legs like a frog
launching herself above the water
Only to startle, to break form when her brother shouts:
“THERESAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!”
and she falls faster than a cannon ball
becoming fragments of an EXPLOSION! in the water.
Jumping from the tool shed’s roof
into a shallow pool
without supervsion
and reaching for the wire that should not be above us
pretending to be like the pro-wrestlers our older siblings forced us to watch pummel one another on television
We just wanted to fly.
It’s every kid’s dream.
It was our dream.
We were every kid.
that’s how we occupied the last summer of our friendship
only we didn’t know it until it was too late and the pieces of us
s
c a
t t
er
ed
And years later we face the hard truth— that we all can’t be high-flyers
We can’t all be Superfly Jimmy Snuka.
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I love this poem and dynamic, kinetic form
Thank you. I’m glad you liked it.
It took me a while to figure out how to write this one. The memory has stuck with me for nearly 3 decades.
so many layers of learning the hard truth here
Indeed. Thanks for reading!
Vivid and bittersweet. “That’s how we occupied the last summer of our friendship” –love the music folded in. I’m right there.
Thanks! Theresa and her sister were OBSESSED with that song. It’s the first thing I think of when I remember that summer.
Thanks for reading (and being right there with us, too. <3
Excellent representation of that time and your emotions! Kudos for the form which doesn’t look easy. Strong verbs – love “launching herself above the water.” Always good to include Annie Lennox!
Thanks! I’m glad you liked it..🖤
This brings fear into every mother’s heart. The way your words play like a child on the page is so sweet and beautiful and fun–but those dangers! yikes.
Thanks for reading! I appreciate your kind words. Yeah, we were daredevils. 🖤