We Wait
It is on a strand of the Ohio
that these hydrangeas grow more beautifully
blue than I have ever seen.
Explosive flower heads full, sway
as the wind sways everything. Blue,
spectacular ~ watery, soft, cyan.
We sit in white rocking chairs
at door’s threshold as time passes
like the barges on the river.
New Dawn roses climb
and drape the fence,
wrought iron against
a placid sky.
We share family stories and laugh,
laugh and catch ourselves.
Talking of our past, past talking.
Inside my mother lies motionless, silent,
her hands, her forehead, her lips, still.
She receives relief from pain,
life,
drop by drop by drop.
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Contrasts – great job – beautiful, serious, sad
Therapy! and thanks for your comment.
What a slow and beautiful first five stanzas, transition, and excruciating ending.
I loved this. What a moving poem drawn in a way that is so caring
Thank you Shaun!
A vivid picture of what life offers us if we will reach out and pull it to us. Nothing is all grief or all joy, but a mixture that holds us up and gives us hope.
Well said Bruce as always and thank you!
Beautiful descriptive language of a pastoral scene! “laugh and catch ourselves” is the first inkling that all is not happy. The last stanza is so poignant and tender, ending with the kicker last line!
The contrasts and reversals are striking.