Well Waiting
Toddler rests on daddy’s shoulder,
turns his head to view me
as a curiosity. They sit
and wait to be called in.
A sudden whiff of stale cigar
and the room fills with shadow
of a man large enough for two
chairs. He comes forward
with a trembling phone discussing
cement, his hands are surprisingly
soft and he ends his conversation
with details of his defective ticker.
In and out we come and go
for the pills
that will extend something
in the body politic of our lives.
The toddler toddles,
the cementer dawdles at the magazine
rack full of old Golf Digests,
draws out The Winners Issue
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A beautiful somber comedy in this, Jim. Wonderful.
A familiar scene for anyone who has spent a lot of time in doctor’s waiting rooms. Very nice.
I can feel the illness and hope in the room.
Love:
He comes forward
with a trembling phone discussing
cement, his hands are surprisingly
soft and he ends his conversation
with details of his defective ticker.
sadly a comment on the come and go pursuit of pills
Snapshot of doctor’s waiting room well captured! You make the mundane come to life.
SO gorgeous- vivid
really love the dance-like movement of
“The toddler toddles,
the cementer dawdles”
love the waiting room setting–such a fertile arena
The last line is a chef’s kiss. I was picturing Daddy Warbucks.