What the Nurse Said
Quit making that noise,
the nurse said. Other people
are in pain here, too.
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Quit making that noise,
the nurse said. Other people
are in pain here, too.
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Senryu !!!!
Yes !
And…..personal for me as well,
Lol….inhale heatd that same poem
from another nurse ….maybe it’s in the handbook.
In the Nurse Ratched playbook, maybe…
Lol
Nurse Ratchett in verse. I marvel at your abilities with the form. No exception here.
That is one succinct poem. It says it all.
very poignant, very good
grin
and
bare (bear?) it
Some once said that to me! Nicky done.
Nicely done
I never heard actual dialogue in a haiku … until now. and it’s effective.
Well done.