what will remain
My bones are rotten.
My joints are as fragile as Russian tea cakes.
My hips, though, ohhhh-my-hips,
my hips are titanium.
The surgeon prophesied: my hips will outlast the rest of me.
He does not know my heart is blue granite.
I lose friends to money or love. I tell myself it’s not any weakness in me.
I lose my husband. I tell myself I can do another day alone.
There are flecks the color of my husband’s eyes in the blue granite of his headstone.
His heart was a worn-out bass drum.
I ached to watch my grandmother knead dough with gnarled hands.
I have my grandmother’s thumbs now.
My hips, though, ohhhh-my-hips,
my hips still remember the rhythm of a bass drum.
My hips will remain silvery-grey.
My heart will stay a slab of blue stone.
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Can so relate to this poem. Love the refrain! This line really hit me: “There are flecks the color of my husband’s eyes in the blue granite of his headstone.”
And that image of “joints are as fragile as Russian tea cakes” blew me away.
Thank you!
And I liked “his heart was a worn-out bass drum.” So many beautiful images in this. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you!
I relate to the poem too. I stopped and lingered at this arresting line. “He does not know my heart is blue granite.”
Absolutely wonderful! I had to read the poem through several times because individual lines kept catching me and wouldn’t let go. I think it was Shakira who said “Hips don’t lie.”
I love this, especially “as Russian tea cakes,” What a description
This is extraordinary! So much description with fresh imagery.
I especially love the repetition of the blue granite of the husband’s eyes.
Nice! I had to read this several times. I love the part about ohhhh-my-hips repeated and the concept of the heart being blue granite as the headstone was blue granite.