When death
When death
When death threatened you and me
and took you, my sister,
and my cousins Ken and A V instead,
I did not wish I was dead.
As for me,
I fell in the floor and my sister
found out she had leukemia, and A V is dead,
David texted me yesterday, and Ken died, was dead
and buried, for he wanted no funeral, said
he wanted no one standing over him,
them staring down on him, even a sister,
and telling how many women he had lead
astray and how many kids he fathered said
he was a wrestler, one Gene said
you couldn’t beat him in a fight
unless you killled him,
Mister Death.
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the repetition like remembering over and over is powerful
Thank you for this reply, River…
I take it to heart…
Nice hap tip to Cummings at the end.
Thanks, Tom and I know well e e cummings. I was aware of using his words as his own and not mine.
like bukowski,
but with some
skin on it’s bones..
The repetition of the sound – Dead, instead, said – drives it. the enjambed lines are very effective in pulling the reader to the next line.