when friends look on
sat upon the broken wall
still- from fine living
even though she cannot see-
pointed fire into sky
blackened- making eye contact
seen through a gown of gauze.
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Love the beginning line so much. Sometimes your writing is so mysterious and whispy. Like moth wings.
” sky blackened……gauze ”
Yummmy
sky
blackened- making eye contact
seen through a gown of gauze.
Really nice!
Love that last line! Now i want a gown of gauze