Roadkill Stomping & Roadkill Scolding
Three young dead skunks in the ditch
like mile markers. All week long,
I’ve seen carrion dip out of blue
and onto their carcasses like night.
For hours I’ve been trying to write this poem
and talk about something. Every day
the universe turns itself into a fractal.
Skunks torn by buzzards’ beak,
skunks in the ditchline. Everything is fragment
and highway.
It’s easier to name it all
than it is to see it, easier to name it
than to carry it home.
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I love the sectioning you did in this poem, and it ended beautifully.
Thanks, Maggie Rue Hess!
Thoughtful poem, Shaun, about what writing a poem can and can’t do. Beautifully constructed
There’s so many things poetry can do 🙂
Thanks, Dr. Bedetti. I appreciate you spending time with my poems.
another great skunk poem!
first stanza knocked me over
even though it could stand alone
Thanks, Jim Lally. I appreciate it.
well done, shaun… you are greatly talented
Means a lot, because I admire you and your work a lot. Thanks, Ron.
Shaun, I have come back to read this one 4 or 5 times. The image of a dead skunk as a mile marker is good. The whole tone of the poem is good. The way you take us from passively observing/looking at a thing to internalizing a thing is apt. Thanks for this poem!
Thank you so much for your thoughtful compliment, Amy Cunningham!