When I was in
the end of a dream,
I could hear birds singing,
ringing against the walls,
calls uncanny in the cistern.
I forgot to explain the cistern.
We caught water from a roof,
roof of our house, red metal,
metal red oxcide from rust.
The cistern had cracked,
cracked up, down, sideways,
ways for water to seep out,
quickly seeping the dug well
water out.
About the dream, I
alone, was in it, I
had finished the task
alone, rescuer of the dug
well, looking up
to see if I was down
deep enough to see
stars in the daylight sky.
Why I went to sleep,
I can’t write you,
you see, I lied about being
alone in that dream.
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love this
dreamfog
reacharound
style of story
telling.
Thanks, dusting to reading my reacharound style of writing. Thanks so much for that…
i couldn’t think of a more technical way to describe this sense of reaching back to borrow/pick up the story… like a hiccup, or a ‘wait, now what was that…’
whatever term we settle on- i’m a fan.
I need your fanfare, dustin…
nice landing of this poem:
I lied about being
alone in that dream.
Pam, thanks for giving my words a: nice landing…
I’m curious about your painting on your page.