When the Music Starts
Now blue notes rise like smoke in the crowded hall,
the sudden swish of brush on drum, a forlorn
wail fills up the horn, and now a sweet voice
starts to hum. Piano keys ring like quick
little bells, tinkling up and down the scale
and linger on chords with texture thick as molasses.
Finally, a word passes through the lips of that smooth
singer, who moans a lament for the girl he was meant
to be with. Thuh-THUMP, thuh-THUMP, the thumb of the upright
bass guy plucks the string he damps, and taps
his foot to show he feels the ache of the blues
in his body, like all of us who’ve come here to feel
something. Heal something. Know we’re not alone.
when the music starts, wherever we are, we’re home.
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We have such a human connection to music! You move us through the story so nicely. Enjoyed this!
I can hear this music, feel the energy, the heat of the crowd. Also the suffering. When you write about music, you bring us home!
“feel/something. Heal something. Know we’re not alone”
I’ve long felt, though poetry attempts to capture the moment an emotion/mystery hits, music IS that moment.
Felt this.
Love this, I think you shared a version of this in a class we both were in
There is a ring in this that reflects more than piano keys quicking.