When you least expected it,
a
deep memory
settled
in,
split you
quiet.
You
felt like
a swollen river,
a
place of real danger.
Cross it
with clarity, love,
in bubble wrap.
Wait to
talk.
Picture
a
daybreak sky, purple.
~ An erasure of Elizabeth Strout’s novel Tell Me Everything, pgs. 126-7, including the poem’s title
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“deep memory
settled
in,
split you
quiet.”
What a stellar opening!!
Thank you, H.A.
You are the Mozart of erasure, Karen! As I live and breathe, I’m going to write one of these one day. And it will be all your fault.
Okay, I’ll take the blame. I’d like to read it, once you write it.
I love the idea of the quiet, which then is burst by the rushing river and danger. Great one, Karen!
Thank you, Nancy!
This is one is beautiful! You say (excuse the way it’s arranged)–
you/quiet/you/felt like/a swollen river/a real place of danger
I’m transported!
Thank you, Linda!
“split you quiet” is stunning! And this might be the first poem I’ve ever read with bubble wrap in it!
Adore: split you
quiet.
and Wait to
talk.
Thank you, Pam.
I love erasure poems, and this is wonderful!
Thank you!