where our state-lines entwine
where our state-lines entwine
your kiss is wet and dark enough
to grow mushrooms. your breath
is chanterelles on my face
pinked by summer.
before i tasted you, i didnt know
i was hungry as these moths the
knapweed entertains.
gnatcatchers on the jag move like
your fingers when you open up about
your past. their plumage seems bluer,
and more radiant with my pulse up
like it is, and all the little drips
from downy leaves.
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Gorgeous! Sensual!
thanks so much!
.so many good things about this poem
.intertwining of knapweed, gnatcatchers, jag
.first stanza z knock out
.pulse up & drips from downy leaves = WOW
.hot, but humorous and intelligent
wow really appreciate these comments
this is wonderful… so many good lines!
thank you mucho
this is great… so many wonderful lines… well thought…
i appreciate that Michelle!