Where the Bay Narrows
The arc of violence–
sulphur and microbes spew dance
the river’s fire lasts
gathering burgundy mist
searching an indigo kiss
(c) Edelweiss Meadows-Millstone
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Lovely music and rhythm in this poem – very evocative use of color imagery!
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Yes! Great imagery. Imagining, I see at least two things: the silver river, coming down into Utah, and an image of a bay, with an inlet showing the flow of water, from space. I enjoyed this greatly!
Thank you so much!