Wild Cherry, Maple, Mock Orange, Holly and Blue Spruce Trees Nearby
There is a bird pecking outside
the transom window
attempting to build a nest
where one can’t be built.
There is a pile of twigs, dead leaves,
faded blossoms on the porch floor below her.
Some things birds don’t seem to learn.
Is it the glass that draws them
or the narrow ledge that looks so promising?
Or the edge of despair?
26 thoughts on "Wild Cherry, Maple, Mock Orange, Holly and Blue Spruce Trees Nearby"
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Love this perspective!
Thanks, Linda.
Beautiful and sad, Melva.
Thanks, Kevin.
It’s good to see you still at it, Melva, working at a high level.
Thanks, Tom. Good to see your work too.
Oh yes. This year, a bird built her nest on my wreath. I’m sorry to say I didn’t know and cried cried cried when the blue egg broke.
Thanks, Elizabeth. Watching the birds, yes.
I love the question at the end. This poem gave me the idea for a new poem. It’s good to see you Melva!
Good to see you too, Linda.
a couple years ago a male yellow warbler was obsessed with the side mirror of my truck. no matter where in my driveway i parked… maybe this bird is hooked on its own reflection.. (?)
i don’t know if birds can recognize themselves ( i suspect they can’t) so in my opinion it becomes a question of
fuck or fight?
There is always a question, right.
love the open ended questions at the end
Thanks, Pat.
The economy of language really adds to the mood. Love this!
Thanks, Vickie.
The allure of the unattainable is strong in this poem. I particularly enjoyed the observational skills you displayed in this write. Thanks for sharing!
As poets our observational skills are alluring. Thanks.
Love the surprising last line!
Thanks, Ellen.
I really like this. Thanks.
Thanks, Gwyneth.
It’s good to read your words, Melva.
Thanks, hope to read some of your words. Patti.
The bird has a captive crowd here…
As every bird should.