Winter Garden
“It’s like walking into a dream. As though it is someplace else
entirely and not simply another
tent…”
– Celia, “The Night Circus”
Days indicating heat, by degrees
above record, and now, newly night—
a breeze—like a breath—
fresh air like secrets whispered
from strawberry moon full to the lip
of this glass of cherry
moscato
I drink; I sink into summer
and red cushions seeming black
in the dark of a familiar
deck, one languid sip
at a time
of my choosing.
Somewhere, a boy
in the shape of a man
fashions ice
in the shape of a garden
that is not this
garden
below,
but someplace else
entirely, and not
simply a new place
to live. I breathe
humidity like water
like air, grounded
in the fires
of imagination
and call it
a gift;
a future.
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*fresh air like secrets whispered*
So nice! And the red theme of the strawberry moon/Moscato/seat cushions turned black is perfection.
Boy in a shape of a man… Making a garden of ice in the heat ..
This poem makes me feel like I’m standing on the side of a rubber looking through one of those very large (I don’t know what they are…. Large metal binoculars you have to put money in to use at touristy places) across to the other side and I like that feeling
Ok. That should have said side of a river 😑
😂 I wondered what a rubber was in that context 😂
Thank you, Arwen! 💙
moment of full moon
with each sip
some light lost
as she wanes to new.
great work. i love how the heat of now breaks down each stanza like shrinking ice cubes in a sweating glass.
Thank you, Dustin!!
“and call it
a gift;” — as this poem is. So rich and sensual.
🙏🏻 Thank you
Big second on the shrinking stanzas as you go! That boy-man -ice-garden structure is wonderful phrasing, and I like the simplicity of the ending!
Thank you, Bernie.
This one had a very different voice coming through (I’m usually verbose like you, as you know!)
I really love this poem. I’m oddly nonverbal this morning. All I can say is good job.
Aww, well that is enough!
Thank you for reading, Linda!
Love this.
Thank you, Jasmine.
I always love your language and the pictures you paint as well!
I really like the idea of an alternate bizarro- mirroring ice garden here. It also calls to mind Edward Scissorhands ice sculpting for me, in the best of ways (being a child of the eighties, lol).
Though I’d not imagined either of your allusions (the name of the new street where I live recalling the contents of a tent two characters co-crafted, for each other, in the novel listed in the epigraph), they both fit right in with said novel and said purpose.
Thank you for your read and response, Austen!
“to live. I breathe
humidity like water
like air, grounded
in the fires”— YES, INDEED!
Another work of beauty, Joseph. Gorgeous!
*blush*. Thank you, H.A, again and always!