With care,
hold a pigeon.
Your hands will
dewdrop with sweat
as you cradle
its faint form,
press back its nails
to prevent injury.
But still,
its pendulum heart
will tick against the
fingers imprisoning
its ribcage, flattening
its feathers, folding in
its talons.
Like pigeons,
our brains and bodies
click against the
clatter of the heavens
holding us —
with how much care,
we do not yet know.
16 thoughts on "With care,"
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How beautiful! Fresh language – “Your hand will/dewdrop with sweat” and “clatter of the heavens/holding us.” Enjoyed this.
Thank you so much!
Poignant poem!
Thanks for reading and commenting!
Your title is very effective. I love the last verse.
Thank you — the poem was based on the sentiment of the last stanza, so I’m glad it all worked for you!
I really like this.
Glad you enjoyed it, Melva!
Wow. I haven’t held a pigeon recently, but your poem made me feel as though I have. Of course the last line is startling and wonderful.
Aw, that’s very kind — thank you!
dewdrop as a verb Yes!
Haha, I liked that description too. Happy you enjoyed the poem, Pat!
I love “Click against the clatter of the heavens.”
Thank you so much, Greg!
I love the comparison of a pigeon’s heart to a clock, it feels so right!
Thanks, Katrina! 🙂