Working Girl’s Blues
I sway,
shoot my eyes
skyward, above
a sweaty throng packed
tight as salted fish.
Another evening spent navigating
this pole or that, hands wrapped
around slick silver cool.
The track thumps steady and
I am sturdy on legs spread
just so, and my mind lists –
avocado, almonds,
tortillas, toothpaste,
toilet paper, tampons –
until a curve throws
my balance.
I shift my hip,
shake it off,
return to the rhythm.
Finally the smooth speaker voice tells
me it’s time
to get off:
Thank you for riding
Chicago Transit. Next stop,
Ravenswood. Watch your step.
I slip through sliding doors,
lose myself in the surging crowd,
begin the long walk home.
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Yes! What a lovely bait and switch. Made me chuckle (and remember how difficult it can be to ride a bus/subway car standing up if you have bad balancing skills).
Yes, there’s certainly an art to it! 🙂
I agree with Katie, you fooled me, and it was fun to be fooled.
So glad, Mike!
“slick silver cool” – wow! This is packed with sensory hints, but I still wasn’t sure what was happening until the ending! This poem demands close attention! Bravo!
Thanks, Kathleen!