Writer’s Turmoil
I stepped out onto poetry’s tightrope,
foot toeing unwritten imagery
that wordlessly exists in my mind’s eye.
I walked across, wobbling,
and made the mistake
of looking down.
Like Dumbo realizing his magic feather
had been claimed by the abyss of strangled sentences,
I plummeted to a roiling sea of my own jumbled words.
My fragmented creation
tousled me, waves of hesitation
crashing into my chest.
The ghosts of figments who’ve never found a way to escape my psyche
claw at my skin,
their salty tears flooding my sinuses.
I thought I might drown in my restless hurricane,
but this poem is proof I can weather the storm.
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So relatable! Keep on keepin’ on, valiant writer!
Thank you for reading the poem and for the encouragement! 🙂
That fact that you got in the right rope is huge! Well done!
On the tight rope*
Thank you!
I felt like I wasn’t going to be able to write anything well today, so I was so excited when I realized this was actually a nice poem! Thank you again for reading!
Beautiful, Katrina! Keep on “plummeting.”
Thank you! Even though it can be stressful, I think it’s healthy for us as writers to get lost in our own minds for a bit from time to time.
“I plummeted to a roiling sea of my own jumbled words” is wonderful. Love the imagery, and as Nancy said, keep “plummeting.” 🙂
Thank you!!
Katerina I really appreciate this poem. The trickster of tongue tiredness mimed as a tightrope walker I can relate to and the balance does rely on not looking down.
I love Dumbo! I remember my first time to Disneyland as a 1st grader Dumbo was my second ride after the Madhatter’s magic teacups ride. There’s something about elephants and feathers thank you for this magic ride!!
I’m so happy you could see yourself in this poem! I love Dumbo too, elephants are my favorite and the story is just so wonderful. I also absolutely adore Disney parks, so thank you for sharing that with me! Flying with Dumbo is so fun, as is the Mad Tea Party! Thank you for your kind words 🙂