Wrong House
The large crow stood
on the fence, alone,
as if waiting for me
when I returned home.
Around us the angled light
of a descending sun streaked
the houses and trees,
but the crow’s black cloak
and eyes sucked light in
and didn’t let it out.
We stared at each other.
Did his presence here have import?
Crows are a symbol of wisdom
but also an omen of death.
I decided not to chance it.
You have the wrong house, I shouted.
He splayed out his onyx wings
and took heavy flight.
He may have signaled fate
or just found a place to light.
9 thoughts on "Wrong House"
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Oooo. I like the foreboding picture you created in my mind!
Bill – Great how you put all the menace on the crow – “black cloak” and sucking all the light out. You signaled the wisdom part by telling the crow he had the wrong house. Please don’t use that wisdom when it comes to Santa’s next visit. Enjoyed this!
Bill –
‘eyes sucked light in
and didn’t let it out’
‘onyx wings’
nice tension you create in this fine poem!
Taking chances even with a crow,
such good work.
Bruce Florence
Just wonderful … I hope the “narrator” really shouted at the crow!
this is great… some really nice lines to draw the reader in… keep up the good work…
A Cento using lines from your poem http://lexpomo.com/poem/talking-with-the-dead-a-cento/
Wow! I’m honored!
Always happy to read a poem about a crow. Lovely images and sense of tension created.