You must come to them sideways *
at first—pictures of your newly-deceased mother.
Like a spiral, winding continually around
an ever-tightening curve toward a
vanishing point, those photos
nearest her death are the most
dangerous—no smile, eyes
glazed as if no light
resides, only raw
fear mixed with
deep sorrow.
You can feel
the lump
in her throat,
what she
tried to
swallow,
what you
are too.
~ After the first line of Charles Simic’s poem “Mirrors at 4 a.m.”
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Karen – I got a lump in my throat reading this! Love the curve of the poem as it whittles itself down. “Those photos/nearest her death are the most/dangerous” Wow!
Yes, Yes on the title! Your work keeps amazing me.
I feel this. I lost my dad to cancer when I was 27. I was inexplicably upset by family members taking photos of/with him when he was in hospice. The photos at the end are the hardest.
Thank you, Sylvia & Melissa!
This is a brave poem. Here’s why: I have a desktop that loops my photos. Whenever those photos nearest my mom’s death appear, I quickly click on “Next desktop background.”
Oh, this is lovely. The title is perfect, & the form/shape works so well for the poem.
I love how the language becomes sparer and sparer as the poem ends. Thanks, Karen.
Fantastic. words and form. Thanks for sharing.
Whew. This poem is powerful.
Powerful
Thanks, Gaby, T.M., Nancy, Wendy, Shaun, & Mike!
Potent and moving!