Your Voice Takes Over Mine
Your voice takes over mine
When I read poetry,
it is your voice I hear
as each word passes my eyes.
On long syllable words,
your voice hesitates
and mine takes over,
but when your voice
takes control again,
it whispers, sexy
as though
into a lover’s ear
on a dark night.
The final line,
surprisedly, is read
like the gentle rhythm
of rain
on a green,
metal roof.
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what comfort there is in the sound of rain falling on a roof, not to mention a green roof
I love that sound as you could imagine…
vivid and lovely.
Thanks, Patti, I appreciate you for reading and this response…
greatly enjoying the images! this is beautiful…
Thanks, upfromsumdirt, I have had very few poem called beautiful. I thank you so very much for that accolade.
Lush, rich, fills the tongue and ears and eyes . . . such lovely work.
great
when you’re lost in it
it’s de 4th hour
when de spirit take over…
Well, Jim, I would guess it is nearer the witching hour if I had my guess. Thanks for the reading of it and this response.
K. Bruce Florence, I like that you find this poem lush, but also something that is good for the tongue, ears and eyes. Thanks also for find it to be lovely work.