Zumba at the Y
Seniors come to believe
they can move to syncopated beats,
to hoots, hollers, and high fives,
and Brianna’s endless smile.
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Seniors come to believe
they can move to syncopated beats,
to hoots, hollers, and high fives,
and Brianna’s endless smile.
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Sounds like a great time!
I think we would all benefit from Zumba-ing at the Y!
I like the hope in the opening lines!
The hardest part
of my exercise class
is the choreography
I agree with Greg about the first line. Also like the alliterative partying in the third. High five, Gaby!
Nice and tight through alliteration and assonance!
Love it — Brianna sounds like a gem.