Sideways
I edit my way into the poem,
sidling between lines, crab-wise,
snip here, smooth there, drag that
around the line break.
I’ve a large claw to fend off
unwelcome suggestions
and muscle reluctant stanzas
into place, and a small
claw to manage the finer
points of revision.
But alas! the full moon
pulls the spring tide high
up the foreshore and wipes
it smooth of my skittering.
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Ah, so true, so true. I may need to borrow the large claw as going off with my nose to the ground from one scent to the next is this ole’ hounds nemesis.
I relate to “muscle reluctant stanzas” and find the large claw pretty intimidating.
I think my fend off claw could produce several crab cakes — thoroughly enjoyed this
I edit my way into the poem….. that is what I do most of the time, but didn’t realize it! Thanks for sharing.
wonderful metaphors with the crab, big claw, small claw, tide erasing the footprints
Smooth of my skittering- great!
Editing, crab style! Love the metaphor!