Troubling the Line
The lyric moment
holds time still,
recreates the circumstances
so we can interrupt,
a time to creature a world together
where guns are melted to make shovels.
Or explore the city
with no money and no phone, as a way
to go beyond the neighborhood,
the rhythm of walking
an action poem.
Or concoct a thought experiment investigating
the poet’s white Michigan hometown.
Or sing a little field holler,
digging dirt in the Mississippi Delta to raise levees,
The mules worked themselves to death
with those songs in their ears.
Or ponder a 12,000-year-old beech wood in Australia,
a witness tree, a wolf tree alone in a field,
left over from a previous ecology.
Poems can make arguments.
They can trouble the line.
We go out wolfing in Kentucky.
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You make me yearn to see the witness tree. the few I have seen take my breath away. Beautiful work as usual.
Vivid images. I love how you have woven them together!
The loved this! And that last stanza was a great way to tie it all together at the end!
I especially like “rhythm of walking/an action poem”
What a glorious piece. I feel of piece of higher purpose in every line.
So much to consider, and the idea of “creatur[ing] a world together” is something so evocative to me. I agree with Tabitha–you can feel the purpose of line here.
You do yourself proud with this poem, Gaby.
So many good lines in this poem! Love the wish of guns being melted to make shovels – never going to happen, but I love the wish! Also, “the rhythm of walking/an action poem”! So evocative! Good title, really sets up the poem!
Wonderful! Esp. love “the rhythm of walking
an action poem.” & “The mules worked themselves to death
with those songs in their ears.” The ending is great as well. Who am I kidding? I like all of this.