Haibun in Memory of a Hobo
Double-thick curtains drawn tight. The swish and flow of linen and lace. I peek through the long slash of light. “Do you think he knows we’re here?” my sister Kate whispers. “Don’t fret,” I reassure. “He’s already down by the boxcars.” Mama started it by fixing him a tuna club with two pecan sandies. My sister thought he broke out of the state penitentiary. She made me double-bolt the front and back doors and the first-floor windows. Kate would chant: “Go away Jimmy Joe, shoo. Jump into that caboose ‘til it goes choo.”
Scary southern nights
Like haints railcars scramble by
Hoot owls and gunshots
I thought of him as St. Francis, tattered and cracked but in a good way. His incoherent mumbling was a code from the undercover angels. A cold front blew the day he disappeared for good. Six inches of snow and 5 degrees above zero in west Tennessee was a once in a generation event. I felt a crushing sensation inside my chest like a steam shovel hitting bedrock. I heard the news on the portable Silvertone. They found him frozen on the north shore of the Cumberland in a threadbare Woody Woodpecker sleeping bag, clenching the last hunk of a tuna and dill on rye in his ice-covered fist.
What is the end like?
Hot, frozen, or like drowning?
Can I bring the snow?
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this smacked of autobiography, even if it didn’t happen and the haiku were like people walking over a grave. nothing but hands up and clapping. bravo!
“. . .peek through the long slash of light” you never leave the poetry as the story winds through the tale. Poems within the poem, such a treat.
wonderful story vividly described. I really enjoyed
Love the haibun form (and you don’t see them often). Oddly, they always seem to be about loss, and a distant wrenching of the heart (the ones I’ve found).
This was powerfully narrative, while remaining lyrical. Very well crafted, Linda.
Beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
wow , this was great! all around! Thanks.
I too am drawn to the form (my book, Sierra Silk, is primarily Japanese forms) – so this intrigued and captured me! Indeed, so much (prose) poetry in the first sections, then deftly sketched in the delicate and poignant haiku. Thank you!