Standing in a boat, a feeling floated
Standing in a boat, a feeling floated
On Lake Cumberland,
escaping Corvid-19,
I cast live bait
toward the rock bank.
Old Seventy Creek
in its flow
falls in mist
against my face.
I stand in the
wooden boat
my father and I
built in a shed
off the milk parlor.
I cast live bait
into the foam topped
roll churning.
In morning light,
laps of water
against the wooden hull,
captures a rhythm that
pushes the boat back.
Words escape my mind.
I want to write poetry for you,
fishing is no longer a priority.
The sun rises, a feeling floated up
to the surface, reminding me
of how lonely I am
without you in our dry bed.
6 thoughts on "Standing in a boat, a feeling floated"
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Each of the stanzas until the last two feels like the rhythm of water lapping against the boat.
Standing in a boat is a skill as much as fishing with live bait. Thanks for feeling the rhythm of water here…
I love how the final stanza comes together with the feeling floating to the surface like a fish.
I did have a fish in mind when I wrote the image. Thanks, Sylvia…
I like this one
The juxtaposition of all the wet things with the dry safety of love
Jerielle, you conquered the juxtaposition as it should be…