PEELING BACK THE SKIN
I bite into a fresh
orange segment. A flood
of tart juice surges
over my tongue. Taste buds
spasm. I cringe, squeeze
my eyes shut, wait
for a wash of sweetness
I hope will follow.
If there is a way to lessen
that initial jolt, please
tell me now. Just because
I can free
citrusy fragrance
with the first prick
of my knife, just because
I have mastered the trick
of removing the peel
in one long sinuous curl,
does not mean
I am somehow prepared
for the coming sting
of such hunger.
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Like this one Kathleen!
Thanks Linda!
So vivid! A single moment brought into sharp focus. Love the title!
I like the title as well. Tasting the tart before the sweet can apply to so many things in life. Nice word choice – “spasm,” “cringe,” “sinuous.” And, of course, “sting/of such hunger” is a keeper!
After very descriptive imagery, I like the change in the last two lines of the poem.
Beverley Byers-Pevitts
Thanks for your comments everyone!
Your details are so precise and beautiful. It’s good to read your words again. (Waiting for that book)
Patti! Thank you. And as luck would have it, Finishing Line Press is publishing my manuscript!! It is available for pre-sale right now. The title is Underground River of Want! I am very excited about it! If you would like, I can email you the link. Or you can just go to their website, choose bookstore and type in the title.
The sensory details are so vivid. This is a poem that, as it implies, needs to have the skin peeled back in order to appreciate the juicy parts that speak of something far more than an orange.
ending gives it metaphoric resonance
well done