Fallow
Fruit selection from the dark orchard
where the stories caught up to Alice
turning her a little sad her white
patent leather shoes on the algae
and cement of a church
in the hollow where rust
runs like blood from crusted hinges
underneath the biggest goddamn
juniper in the world where bones
in bear scat fertilize
the smoke of autumn’s passing.
I needed to dream today,
and instead I just broke stuff.
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I love the visual/aural of “where rust/ runs like blood from crusted hinges” and the way the phrases pile on like a runaway dream. I also like the way the couplet “caught up” with the stories.
Lovely.
Such strong imagery tied with a bow at the end with the last two lines! Love it.
Captivating.
Exquisite!
Keep breaking it, son!
The beautiful laundry list of images strung together in one fly by “sentence.”
A whole modern fairy tale in a breath.
Still one of your biggest fans :p
That ending is just a punch to the gut!
I cannot love this more–it’s a perfect morsel.