Lucid Dream as Lunar Dust
My night body floats
into a moonscape. I am
no longer human. I am atom,
a speck of lunar
sand. Yet I remember the silk
of river, scent of yellow
elder. I remember when
I was hard-shelled & pensive
like a slow-footed
terrapin. I remember the insistence
of muscle & how I lugged
my troubles around; they were weighty
as the biggest hams
from Prague or a backpack
stuffed with slabs
of granite. Now reduced
to moon grit, I am an imperceptible
hum. To be tremoring
fleck, to be unshackled
from the burdened gravity
of earth brings
euphoria & I settle
into the featherweight
until I began to roll
back to the blue
planet, picking up mass
& weight. Water
rushes over me along
with deep sea mammals, kelp
& coral. I backstroke
into my own flesh
as I toss off the twisted
sweat-soaked sheets.
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Holy Mother—whaaaaa? What did I just read? I floated through every gentle line, so many specific lines of the heredity and memories of the dreamscape moon grit that turns around and crash lands into a human body after she dwells in the “featherweight”, back into a body, your sweating freaked out body. This was fun!
from terrapin to moon grit.
i’m totally in!
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I am an imperceptical hum!
This dream scape as finely
drawn as moon dust.
Incredible!
Aside from the content of this poem, which is amazing, I absolutely adore the form, which mirrors it so beautifully. those delicate enjambments and ampersands create the thin rope we slide down on. You’ve become a master at this and have found a form of your own that’s so distinctive, like a signal. Bravo.
beautiful. what strikes me about this poem is that almost all of the language and metaphor is weighty yet the whole thing felt light light light!
Dynamite ending!
What great imagery and imagination. Love “backstroke into my own flesh” If you have dreams like that, can you invite me along?!