This Poem is About Birds
after “Orchids Are Sprouting From the Floorboards” by Kaveh Akbar
Birds in the clutch of trees beep goodmorning
in between home and the car parts factory. Birds
on the steaming rail near the laundry. Birds
in the fields with the chestnut horse, and birds
in the poems on my phone. Birds on lines
and birds in the fog above the Kentucky River.
Birds driving their cars to work in flocks. A line
of birds in a row by the state highway. Birds twisted
into scarecrows by the wind. Birds in bottles,
birds in the plastic liner, piled three high.
Birds like glory. Birds like shimmer, like musk.
Birds hunting prey. Birds mow their lawns
in stained tennis shoes. Birds sing, birds work, birds
lie on the couch. If I could do anything, I would fly.
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So much to love about these birds and this poem! I told the Sisters of Notre Dame today that I was gonna sing a couple of songs that were “for the birds.” They laughed. And now I find the grace of this poem.
” If I could do anything, I would fly. “
I love it! The birds sing for us. Why not return them the favor!
I love this poem!! “Birds twisted/into scarecrows” is a spooky image that makes me yearn for Halloween!
I’m kinda ready for fall too, right after June.
lol, me too!
Another fan, love “Birds like glory. Birds like shimmer, like musk.” It’s a gorgeous line.
BTW — picked up a copy of Kumin’s Selected today. Thanks for the inspiration.
Thanks, Bill! I think I might have to add her book to my list now, too.
LOL Shaun – I think I love you!! Going to print this out and put it next to my computer. Happy to see the poem was inspired by Kaveh Akbar as well! (PS You fly in your poems — next best thing)
I was thinking of you and our bird talk when I wrote it!
I really enjoyed this one
Thank you, Renee!
Lovely! Thank you.
Thank you, Sue!
I love birds and you do them so well in their expected and unexpected places!
Birds twisted /into scarecrows.
Birds like shimmer, like musk.
Birds mow their lawns/in stained tennis shoes.
Thank you, Pam!
Love this! My favorite line: “Birds like glory. Birds like shimmer, like musk.” Thanks for the link to Kaveh Akbar’s poem. I’m not familiar with him.
Thanks, Karen! His book and chapbook are really good.
The turn in the last line is so good, exactly what the poem needed in that moment
Thanks, Kris.
What a wonderful list! “Birds like glory. Birds like shimmer, like musk”–one of my favorite lines in this poem. And the last line is great.
Thank you, Taunja!