Life Cycles
Gus wore a filthy brown
tunic, rope belt & no
shoes. Some called him
half wit & threw
dirt at him. To me
he was like Saint Francis
in disguise. A tattered
oracle. While stooping
in the winter-dead
weeds Gus preached
to the winter crows. Francis,
the protector, kissed the black
boils of the leper. A three
inch coating of clear sparkling
ice on the bare
trees the day Gus
vanished. I heard about
it while ordering jelly
donuts at Stella’s. He was found
in a throwaway Woody
Woodpecker sleeping bag
on the bank of Difficult
Creek. Froze to death
clenching a pack
of bologna. He planned
to divide the thick-cut
slices among cronies
at the shelter. It felt
like a steam shovel
shattered the bedrock
behind my ribs. Grief
longer than lifetimes, mourning
for more than one life. Saint
Francis kissed the black
boils of the lepers. Gus preached
to the winter crows.
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It felt
like a steam shovel
shattered the bedrock
behind my ribs.
Evocative. I knew St. Francis was going to be invoked. Immediately. The refrain of Francis kissed the black boils, Gus preached to the winter crows. Gorgeous how that came in like music – twice. This was elegant.
Not that most people would even note it but Gus was also dressed like Saint Francis — rope belt etc.
at least
in death
he is
finally free.
the Gus in our town
was Walking Bill
who talked to the birds
and never took a ride
because he was in a hurry.
What a loving portrait
Linda, your talent with the jam. the enjambment of every stanza really drives this one and is almost unnoticed. Love the title.
This is so nice. Love the images, that steam shovel — those winter-dead leaves come back in a haunting way on that day of the three inch ice. Those black boils and the winter crows. Lovely.
He planned
to divide the thick-cut
slices among cronies
at the shelter.
Crushingly poignant.
This is such a powerful story, Linda. And your line breaks keep the reader going – needing to get to the end.
Had me from here:
Gus wore a filthy brown
tunic, rope belt & no
shoes.
to here:
Gus preached
to the winter crows.
Love:
like a steam shovel
shattered the bedrock
behind my ribs.
Linda, this is such a rich narrative and evocative lyric. Such skill you use. I agree w all the comments of others!