measure 1
I could
measure my life in
awkward moments
crooked smiles in midnight
selfies
wrinkles inside wrinkles shaped by
smirking
crooked nose lopsided frowning
ragged poems neglected gardens
morning glory vines berserk on weathered
fences
gratitude for wind in empty spaces
9 thoughts on "measure 1"
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
I like how every separate “stanza” is an image
A lot is conveyed throughout this poem! At the start “Awkward moments” really sets up a tone of vulnerability and introspection. And I really enjoyed the final line and how it suggest a sense of acceptance and appreciation.
I appreciate the “could” and the last line or two frame the middle
This is lovely! I especially love the use of “berserk” in the penultimate stanza, and I appreciate your subtle consonance that adds a delightful melody to the poem.
I like a lot of things about this poem. The phrase “wrinkles inside wrinkles shaped by smirking” is so original and it made me laugh out loud.
Yup.
You got it.
Cane back and yes, that measuring of one’s life in awkward moments 💔
AH! I love this. Love love love this. I smiled through my entire read. “ragged poems and neglected gardens” in the same line is intriguing.
Also the “wrinkles inside wrinkles shaped by smirking” created a literal smirk on my face and giggle! I could keep rereading this. Simplistic beauty and appreciation of.
What an intriguing list! Thanks for sharing.