Derby Day
In other years I might have been
at Churchill Downs, screaming in the infield
with the rest of the slobs, tearing up betting slips
as most of my picks come in dead last
& doing my best not to think about the horses
who didn’t make it to the gate—broken fetlock,
broken down. This year I’m broken down myself,
one way or another, so it’s too close to the bone.
The coronation bores me but my eye
keeps landing on all the king’s horses
impatiently bobbing their heads while waiting
to haul the Cinderella carriage home. They know
what happens at the stroke of midnight.
Folks in Kentucky say it’s safe to plant a garden
after Derby Day, so I scatter a handful of seeds
from a friend in a bucket of potting soil
on the porch, cover them up with another
layer of earth. Funny how planting something
& burying it is the same motion of the hands.
On the street, mounted police horses
clip-clop by. It comes to me that Lincoln’s cortège
must’ve sounded like this.
Night’s coming on, a chill setting in.
I shower the seeds with half a glass of water,
toast them with the other half,
& say a short prayer under my breath.
Who knows if we can handle another late frost.
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The tone of this is nothing short of masterful. The sadness — that feeling of being “broken down myself” just bleeds from between the lines. And your choices! “too close to the bone”, “Lincoln’s cortege,” “another late frost” — wonderful. Such a pleasure to read your work this month, Kevin.
Thanks, Bill! Reading your work this month has been one of the highlights for me, too. All the best of luck in the coming year to you, Brother Poet!
Wonderful
Simply wonderful.
a lot of balance in this soulful poem:
dead horses
a dispirited crowning
seeds planted with doubt,
kinda how i feel today.
Thanks for all your wonderful poems
reminds me a little bit of nabokov.. and how he handled horses…
see you next year.. 🙂
only in a poem can I imagine you “screaming in the infield / with the rest of the slobs,” but the image contrasts beautifully with the winddown
Ahh, so good! The tone is perfectly sad. And I love a poem with horses.
like the back and forth between coronation, Derby, and planting. Very nice, and thank you for a month of good poems
A wonderful piece with so many memorable images – from the buried hopes of failed betting slips to the aha-moment of burying sharing something with planting. I’ve loved reading your work this summer, Kevin, take care and keep on planting!
I agree with what everyone else has said. What can I add? I just want to say it’s an honor to be close to you as a writer and a friend and to accompany you as continue to grow as a person and a writer.
Thanks darlin. The feeling is mutual. You and Coleman bless my life every day, whether I see you in person or not.
1 thing to miss
tomorrow
KN’s poems.
Thanks
Love the way the poem moves between seemingly disparate subjects, but how they’re linked so seamlessly. So full of feeling. It’s been a pleasure to read your work this month. Best to you!
I agree with the others- your poems evoke so many vivid images and emotions. Thanks for sharing! Sad it had to end!
Kevin, your work always has such an eye for full scene and a pathos hard to beat. I’ve enjoyed your work this month!