Dice in the Air
(A Sestina)
After a week away from home
we wake before light hits the land,
in the house everyone’s asleep
so we make black tea in silence,
tip-toe outside into the fresh air
and load up into our prairie Prius.
You drive. In the quite of the Prius
I doze and dream I’m already home,
no long miles or air-conditioned air,
just the gentle contours of our land
– but an abrupt swerve ends the silence
and any hope that I could sleep.
The interstate never sleeps
and as the worn tires of the Prius
whine, I worry and read in silence
the billboards: Try the down home
feel of Western Wear; Ozarkland,
where we have hookups and free air.
You start making signals in the air
for me to drive and you to sleep,
then pull over at Produce Land.
I stretch. You walk around the Prius
to a plowed field and like at home
come back muddy. I drive. Silence
never raises her head for air, Silence
is smiling and sailing towards home,
Silence is you in the beauty of sleep.
Illinois, Indiana… our Prius
carries us on into Bluegrass land.
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we never know where we may land
it could be laughter or silence
it could be something to pry-us
apart, this trip was dice in the air,
a reminder to always sleep
together whether away or at home
now at home on our land
we let Prius have her sleep
and we can hear the silence of the air
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I’m very impressive for you to write a sestina. It’s a great poem.
Jim , really ? A sestina on 6/6?
And an amazing and comfortable one at that.
Wow. Stunning example.
Great poem.
P.s. I have to know the ‘air’ line of the 5th or I won’t be able to sleep.
In the fifth stanza I think you left a placeholder for the sixth line and forgot to go back and fill it in. The poem still works. After all you attempted a bloody sestina and you are a badass.
yes!!! i was JUST thinking about this yesterday…
learning to listen to the sound of nothing
p.s. welcome home.
After the first stanza I wrote the directly onto lexpo. We were having a storm and just as I finished I lost connectivity. and my poem. I had to rewrite the whole thing from memor.y and was so tired I screwed up the 5th stanza.
Also I could have done better with the last line.
Well. That officially just blew my mind 🙂 incredible write Jim!
I really enjoyed this, but my favorite section was:
“Silence/never raises her head for air, Silence/is smiling and sailing towards home,/Silence is you in the beauty of sleep.”
What a wow!
Love this it feels very comfortable almost like silence is home
The last two stanzas are complete in themselves – I love that first line – such full of potential for any number of diversions! Thanks for taking us on hat trip!
Hear the silence 🥰
The work of a true poet…