love’s heavy lift
she hoped this time
it would be
easier
trusted this go-round
would prove her
wise
found out love
offers not
wisdom-
but requires
a shit ton more
love
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I enjoy the precise mechanics here. The clear algebra of love requires love. And a shit ton of it.
You say a lot in very little. It moves quickly, yet slowly. I like that.
like an oracle on acarousel or merry-go-round.
a new verse everytime she comes around..
great use of form.
Yes! Love this, both the form and the content.