Promise
Promise
All these years,
I have kept.
I have not painted you
nude except–
unless the words
across the line
and down, words
that lay my feelings
bare– count as
my betrayal.
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Fantastic!
Thanks, Liz for reading my work and replying. I appreciate that.
beautiful exploration of the overlapping
of a lotta different levels..
Life presents us with, as you put it, “a lotta different levels” as we go through it.
Beautiful, like a Gary Snyder lyric, with an effective twist.
It is such an honor to say my poem is like a Gary Snyder lyric. That’s a compliment that I cherish.
it happens to the best of us
And I imagine, also to the worst of us. Thanks again for reading and replying.
Incredible !
That ! thrills me, Coleman.
Such a beautiful complexity!
Thanks, Sylvia, I’ve participated this year by cutting to the chase in my words. They reflect the short time we have, but have little control over…