Near an Old House
These monuments, they speak to me
in shadowed figures set in stone
recording births and deaths in solemn tones.
I shiver with the wildness of this place,
awed how time reclaimed a haunted spot
of sacred ground, neglected – now forgotten –
family plot.
My boots crush meadow grass,
and trumpet vine assaults the rusted fence,
sharp evidence no one comes
to tend this place of pine box memories
lost to verdant fields and pin oak trees.
22 thoughts on "Near an Old House"
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You captured the haunted nature of place without even mentioning a graveyard. Way to show not tell! Beautiful description. Love the subtle use of rhyme.
Thank you so much, Linda.
Wonderfully described
Thanks!
Such great descriptions, EE. “pine box memories” is a favorite.
IThank you, Bill.
I love the way you used rhyme here–it adds a mythic tone. Love “and trumpet vine assaults the rusted fence,/sharp evidence no one comes…”
Thank you so much, Shaun.
Love the feel/tone of this poem, set up by the rhyme and rhythm. So evocative.
Thank you, Karen.
I could feel quiet in this walk and the shivers in the edge of present and past. Love “trumpet vine assaults the rusted fence,”
Thanks so much, Pam! I have so appreciated your feedback this month. I hope we get to meet someday.
The density of the writing speaks to the unspoken drama.
Thank you so much, Nancy.
“My boots crush meadow grass,
and trumpet vine assaults the rusted fence”
Love the strong verbs here! Human intrudes on nature; nature fights back against the fence’s intrusion.
Thank you, Sylvia!
Lovely capture of a moment and place. Made me think of many graveyards from Gettysburg to Machpelah that I have visited.
Aaahhh, yes.
I lived in Shelby County for many yrs. There are more than 200 cemetaries in Sheby County. The family cemetary on a place I rented inspired the 1st draft.
Then in 2009-2010, I lived at a place that also had a family cemetary — a very unusual one. Slaves were buried with the family.
Love that you use the word “wildness” with such an ordered and somber space.
Especially enjoyed:
“awed how time reclaimed a haunted spot”
Thank you so much, Bud.
Realistic, heartfelt descriptions give this place a life of its own.
Thank you so much, Virginia. This poem went through many revisions to get it where I wanted it. LoL I appreciate your comment.